Darimana datangmu
Aku tak pernah mengundangmu
Namamupun tak terdaftar di bukuku
Kau datang tanpa permisi
Mengacaukan halaman pribadiku
Mengobrak-abrik kembang yang tertata rapi
Kau menyusup bagai nyamuk di siang bolong
Berisik dan berghibah di balik kelambu
Berpura-pura mengelus raga kasihku
Enak saja kau bersemayam di tubuhku
Tak mau tahu bubrahnya urusanku
Biar saja kau mau remuk ragaku
Jiwaku tak hendak berlutut di depanmu
Pergi …..pergi…..pergi
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Inspirational poet... I love it very much.... give me full coloured days...
regards
ardi nugroho
"aku tidak mengundang mu" sounds like a word "aku tidak mengharapkan mu". don't ya think so ma'am?
it may be a different case, but let's see, ma'am..
once, a friend of mine told me that being a boss is not all great.
he put his position, of being a boss, in simile, which sounds not too good, a "toilet". none likes its bad smell, but they NEED it for guarantee of their fulfillment.
i don't know why i remember that story when reading ur title here.
just guess, maybe coz the influence of marxism u taught us is depicted clearly in that case.
That interesting simile always keep in my mind till today. honestly, i know how bad a people in a "toilet" position. but mam, what make me writing this is a question that always come with no answer in my mind since i studied marxism. "when life can come with no marxism depicted in it for maybe about 90%, 90% of our life is free of marxism?" is it possible? thx so,ma'am...:)
--i submit my comment's assignment in "hidup adalah ujian" of yours--
have a nice weekend ma'am...:)
I am so sorry, mam. If I have send this comment just now. Actually, I don’t know about poem a lot but I love it. I still confused why I am very sensitive if there are telling about love word. And, I am so sorry again if I conclude that your poem is love poem. Because, I heard that love comes without we know when and where love exist in our heart. Like in word :
Darimana datangmu
Aku tak pernah mengundangmu
I think it means how love comes suddently in our heart and when we feel it in first that’s hurt our heart, but we want and like it. Then, in word :
Kau datang tanpa permisi
Mengacaukan halaman pribadiku
Mengobrak-abrik kembang yang tertata rapi
Kau menyusup bagai nyamuk di siang bolong
Berisik dan berghibah di balik kelambu
Berpura-pura mengelus raga kasihku
Like in this word, when we got that feel, we felt that we are not already yet to get hurted. I think, when someone fallen in love to another, he/she will angry and sometimes like they don’t know what will they do with their feel. They cant throw away like rubbish because sometimes, they want it and they will so happy when they meet someone who they loved and surely, love exist in their heart. Then :
Biar saja kau mau remuk ragaku
Jiwaku tak hendak berlutut di depanmu
Pergi …..pergi…..pergi
I think, it means how someone to protect their heart from love it self. I don’t know, somestimes someone who ever loved, but he/she hurted because of it, he/she always want to close their heart and also don’t want to receive another love. Because, he/she is not already to get hurt in their heart in twice. And, I know it.
But, I am so sorry, mam, if I made a mistake from your poem and directly to relate it with love.
actually, i confused how i send my comment in your blog, mam hehe...so that's why, i am so late to send this comment...i really sorry, mam....
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